The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following table demonstrates the dissimilarities in the levels of poverty of different family types in Australia in 1999.
Overall
, young families with children
were more likely to be poor than households with elderly members, except for the single without children
type.
Regarding the three major categories,whereas
the poverty rate was the highest among homes with only one primary carer, at 21%, followed by a 2% lower group of single individuals without sons or daughters, at 19%. Correct word choice
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By contrast
, 12% of couples with children
were classed as poor, ranking third in the table.
In terms of the remaining categories, single aged
persons and elderly couples made up 6% and 4%, respectively of the Australian total rates of poor households, considered as the least likely to live below the poverty line, as opposed to pairs with Add a hyphen
single-aged
children
, at 7%. Lastly
, all households which live in impoverishment in Australia accounted for 11%.Submitted by ktebaeplease on
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