You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. State how this qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to request you for providing me with one week's leave beginning on August 16th and ending on August 21st. As you are aware that these days flu is a highly communicable disease.

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, I have initiated a short-term course regarding fundamental obligations for declining the infection

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surgical hand washing and hand sanitisation.

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I need one week off to get informed about these procedures. In my perspective, it would be really beneficial for the hospital as I will use

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entire learning

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working in the hospital setting.

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, I could prepare certain pamphlets and charts to hang on walls of the health care centre indoors and outdoors which would depict learned guidance. These instructions might be helpful to make healthy and secure atmosphere for patients

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for staff members.

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, more patients would come here

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there would be economic growth. I hope you would comprehend , and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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