The table shows the proportion of fifty-year-old adults who were never married over five decades in Japan. The chart represents the Japanese marriage and divorce rate from 1970 to 2016. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportion of fifty-year-old adults who were never married over five decades in Japan.  The chart represents the Japanese marriage and divorce rate from 1970 to 2016.

Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the
number
of adults in Japan (in thousands) between 1970 and 2010, who by
age
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the age
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fifty
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of fifty
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had yet to marry. The chart illustrates the marriage and divorce
rate
for Japanese people over a similar period of 46 years.
Overall
, as the
number
of married couples significantly decreased over the period, the
number
of unmarried adults in Japan aged 50 increased,
while
the divorce
rate
rose, albeit gradually. The table shows an increase in the proportion of unmarried Japanese nearing retirement age from 2% (1970) to 15% (2010), with a particularly high rise between 1990 and 2000 when the
number
considerably increased by 5%. Fewer people getting married may
similarly
have affected the marriage
rate
which almost halved over forty years. In 1970 over a million Japanese got married, which had decreased by a fifth in 1980, fluctuated slightly until 2000 before steadily falling again to over 600
thousand
by 2016.
By contrast
, Japan’s divorce
rate
doubled, though more gradually over the same period. In 1970, the
rate
stood at around 100
thousand
, increasing slowly to 175
thousand
by 1990, peaking at approximately 280,000 in 2000
then
plateauing from 2010 to 2016 at just over 200
thousand
.
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