The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

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The given graph illustrates the ratio of energy produced from five different sources (Coal, Oil, Natural

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, Hydro

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and Nuclear

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) in France between 1990 and 2010.

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, it is abundantly clear that the distribution of

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and coal accounted for the highest amount of fuels used during 1990

whereas

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nuclear

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usage accelerated significantly in 2010. In 1990, natural

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and coal were recorded to have the same quantities, which was just under a third. On the same note, Oil ranks right after it with a percentage of 22%. Meanwhile, nuclear and hydropower barely reach 20% in terms of contribution to France's energy.

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, the numbers completely changed 20 years later, with Nuclear

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soaring to over half of the figure. An insignificant amount of hydropower was used

as well as

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natural

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which used to be one of the major sources of electricity.

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, the distribution of coal and oil

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decreased dramatically to both 13%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas, power with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People in the 21st century have a better quality of life than those in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?