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you recently organize an all day meeting for your company which took place in our local hotel in their feedback participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was sad for lunch. write a letter to the manager of the hotel in your latter.

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Dear Sir I am writing
this
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 letter to the manager of the
hotel
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, I am very happy that my people do you like your
hotel
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 and they
also
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 like
environment
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the environment
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 of your
hotel
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. They feel very comfortable doing all day
meeting
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meetings
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 in our
hotel
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, but they are very unhappy
about
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with
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 your food service. They are all healthy and
on
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apply
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hygiene
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hygienic
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. The foods are very only and most of them are burned. You should say them that the food should be very clean and not over good as well and hygiene is the most important. kind regards

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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