The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart indicates which part of Australia
where people
come into the life and percentage
of people
who were born in or outside of Australia
between the years 1995 and 2010.
Firstly
, in 1995, the most proportion is people
who open one’s eyes to the world outside of Australia
with 60 % However
, provinces are the final choice for parents to give birth in 1995 with approximately 15 per cent. Additionally
, in 2010, most mothers preferred cities to bring a baby into the world outside Australia
with 80%. Although
the least percentage
of the bar graph is rural areas outside of Australia
with roughly 5%.
Secondly
, over 40% of humans bring forth cities in Australia
in 1995. Even though with 20% public’s last
decision is towns in Australia
in 1995. As an attachment, over 60% of society decided to have a baby in cities in Australia
in 2010. Nonetheless
, communities' ultimate decisions for giving birth in Australia
are in rural areas and metropolis with the same percentage
below 20%
All in all, parents' determination about where to born their children, changed over the years. Such
as, the percentage
of rural areas and towns dropped among people
who were born in or outside of Australia
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