The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart indicates which part of
Australia
where
people
come into the life and
percentage
of
people
who were born in or outside of
Australia
between the years 1995 and 2010.
Firstly
, in 1995, the most proportion is
people
who open one’s eyes to the world outside of
Australia
with 60 %
However
, provinces are the final choice for parents to give birth in 1995 with approximately 15 per cent.
Additionally
, in 2010, most mothers preferred cities to bring a baby into the world outside
Australia
with 80%.
Although
the least
percentage
of the bar graph is rural areas outside of
Australia
with roughly 5%.
Secondly
, over 40% of humans bring forth cities in
Australia
in 1995. Even though with 20% public’s
last
decision is towns in
Australia
in 1995. As an attachment, over 60% of society decided to have a baby in cities in
Australia
in 2010.
Nonetheless
, communities' ultimate decisions for giving birth in
Australia
are in rural areas and metropolis with the same
percentage
below 20% All in all, parents' determination about where to born their children, changed over the years.
Such
as, the
percentage
of rural areas and towns dropped among
people
who were born in or outside of
Australia
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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