The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates how much dairy products,
milk
and
butter
, are consumed by four
age
groups
in countries in Europe.
Overall
, it can be seen that
milk
and
butter
consumption
increases with
age
increment, except for
butter
usage for
seniors
. It
also
is clear that younger
groups
, less than 25
years
, consume more full-fat products than other
groups
do. In terms of
milk
, younger
people
, less than 25
years
, drink 1200 cc of
milk
weekly, which is the lowest among all
groups
, and more than a
half
prefer full fat to low fat.
This
pattern is reversed for
seniors
who consume 700 ccs more
milk
than younger
people
, and two-thirds prefer low-fat
milk
. The
consumption
of
milk
for the other two
groups
, 26 to 45 and 45 to 65 is almost similar 1650 and 1670 respectively.
Although
more than two-thirds of the 26 to 45
group
drink low-fat,
this
number is slightly more than
half
for the 45 to 65
group
. Regarding
butter
, its
consumption
increases with
age
increment, except for
seniors
.
people
younger than 25
years
eat 12
grams
of
butter
weekly which is just seven
grams
less than the next
age
group
26 to 45
years
.
However
, their interest patterns in fat content are reversed since 60 per cent of the young
group
like full fat compared to 40 per cent in the other
group
. The middle-aged
group
and
seniors
have almost similar tastes in fat,
half
prefer low-fat
butter
. The only difference is the proportion of
consumption
as
seniors
eat
butter
half
of the middle
age
people
do, at 30
grams
and 60
grams
respectively.
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