You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employee say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear parents I have seen your advertisement in
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Australian magazine I have a Lougee
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after my parents and my son so I have experience of
this
job
, so I am interested in your
job
if I get a chance for
this
job
I would work very hard and parent caregiver to everyone I and parent caregiver to everyone. I like
this
job
very much and I have more knowledge about
this
job
. I have already
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this
job
beforeI
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before I
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this
job
very much and I have more knowledge about
this
job
. I have already
did
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this
job
before so I will be very familiar to everyone I will be very happy to do
this
job
. I feel very lucky. And I spend my leisure time in Australia visiting many new
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places and I went to visit my friends I don't have many friends. and I went to my
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interview in many places, but most of them are not suitable for me. So if I got to do
this
job
, I will be very hard-working and do my
job
properly. kind regards
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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