The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates a trend of five different foods (Vegetables, Fruit, Meat, Bread and Seafood) consumed in
kg
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per
person
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per year over the
last
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sixty
years
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in Australia.
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, vegetables with some ups and down remained the most eaten food and seafood as the least one with almost as a static consumption. Fruits and meat crossed in the middle
years
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as fruits jumped from their third position to second by the end of the given
years
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. In 1950, almost 140
kg
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of per
person
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vegetables were eaten which fell to 120 in the next two decades. It showed a similar rise and fell pattern again over the next 2 decades in 1990 and
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rose to a peak of 160 by 2010. Fruits reached second best consumed at 140
kg
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per
person
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per year by the end of the year before having significant fluctuations during the middle
years
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and starting from 80 at first. Meat consumption started at roughly 108
kg
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per
person
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and
then
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fell a little to 96 by 1960 and remained at the same level for the next thirty
years
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. There was a rise of 20 from 1980 to 1990 followed by a continuous downfall trend and reached 80 by 2010. Bread began at 40
kg
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per
person
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and had risen to about 70 before jumping down to 60 by 2010. Seafood followed a static trend over the
years
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kg, person, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "static" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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