The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates a trend of five different foods (Vegetables, Fruit, Meat, Bread and Seafood) consumed in
kg
per Use synonyms
person
per year over the Use synonyms
last
sixty Linking Words
years
in Australia.
Use synonyms
Overall
, vegetables with some ups and down remained the most eaten food and seafood as the least one with almost as a static consumption. Fruits and meat crossed in the middle Linking Words
years
as fruits jumped from their third position to second by the end of the given Use synonyms
years
.
In 1950, almost 140 Use synonyms
kg
of per Use synonyms
person
vegetables were eaten which fell to 120 in the next two decades. It showed a similar rise and fell pattern again over the next 2 decades in 1990 and Use synonyms
then
rose to a peak of 160 by 2010.
Fruits reached second best consumed at 140 Linking Words
kg
per Use synonyms
person
per year by the end of the year before having significant fluctuations during the middle Use synonyms
years
and starting from 80 at first. Meat consumption started at roughly 108 Use synonyms
kg
per Use synonyms
person
and Use synonyms
then
fell a little to 96 by 1960 and remained at the same level for the next thirty Linking Words
years
. There was a rise of 20 from 1980 to 1990 followed by a continuous downfall trend and reached 80 by 2010.
Bread began at 40 Use synonyms
kg
per Use synonyms
person
and had risen to about 70 before jumping down to 60 by 2010.
Seafood followed a static trend over the Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "static" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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