The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

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expenditures

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the expenditures

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of

children

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and adults on four prevalent goods in percentages, in the UK in the year 1998.

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, the adults, including men and women spent on

food

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most of their income,

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children

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, including boys spent mostly on music.

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, the first category contributed a mere

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per cent

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of their income on

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item.

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the table, the least

percent

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,

women

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of women

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spent on videos,

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is equal to 0.5%. On

food

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,

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,

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category of people contributed 39% of their revenues.

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, adults and men spent 1% and 2% on videos, and 25% and 14%, which is the highest percentages, on

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apply

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food

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. All these people spent the same

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(5%) on music,

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. Contrastingly,

children

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, boys, and girls do not often buy

food

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, and throughout the year, spent only 10%, 9%, and 11% on

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item, respectively. But on

music

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,music

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these categories spent the most of their income (from 38% to 40%). Electronic equipment, though, is not a prevalent item, and

children

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is

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the only category, that spent 23%

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because other people spent

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far less than

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number.