The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
The given table chart represents information on
expenditures
of Correct article usage
the expenditures
children
and adults on four prevalent goods in percentages, in the UK in the year 1998.
Overall
, the adults, including men and women spent on food
most of their income, whereas
children
, including boys spent mostly on music. However
, the first category contributed a mere percent
of their income on Change the spelling
per cent
this
item.
According to
the table, the least percent
, Replace the word
percentage
women
spent on videos, Change preposition
of women
which
is equal to 0.5%. On Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
, on the other hand
, this
category of people contributed 39% of their revenues. Likewise
, adults and men spent 1% and 2% on videos, and 25% and 14%, which is the highest percentages, on the
Correct article usage
apply
food
. All these people spent the same percent
(5%) on music,Replace the word
percentage
also
.
Contrastingly, children
, boys, and girls do not often buy food
, and throughout the year, spent only 10%, 9%, and 11% on this
item, respectively. But on music
these categories spent the most of their income (from 38% to 40%). Electronic equipment, though, is not a prevalent item, and Add a comma
,music
children
is
the only category, that spent 23%Change the verb form
are
,
because other people spent Remove the comma
apply
by
far less than Change preposition
apply
this
number.Submitted by madinatagybergen6 on
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