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The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The presented pie chart shows data about the proportion of several types of
energy
 output in France between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, in France
petrol
, gas and coal
production
 constituted the majority of
energy
production
 for both of the years,
however
percentage
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the percentage
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 of the
petrol
 industry decreased from 1995 to 2005.
To begin
, in 1995
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
Petrol
production
 accounted for 29.27% of total
energy
production
 in France. The figure for Gas and Coal
production
were
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was
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 29.63% and 29.80% respectively.
The nuclear
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Nuclear
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production
 amounted to about 6.5%. The indicator for other
sector
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sectors
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 was equal to approximately 5% which was
least
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the least
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 produced
energy
 output type. In 2005, Coal
production
 was
leader
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 position in
energy
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the energy
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 sector which increased slightly compared to
previous
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the previous
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 period and constituted almost 31%.
However
, compared to
the
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1995,
Petrol
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the Petrol
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 industry decreased sharply and
equaled
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 to just under 20%. Gas
production
also
 rose minimally and comprised
to
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30.31%. The nuclear and
other sector
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another sector
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 of
energy
production
noticeable
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 grew and the proportions were 10.10% and 9.1% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petrol, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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