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Write an email to the company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Explain the problem. Tell them why you need internet service. Suggest what the company should do now.

#email #company #internet #service
To, The Customer Grievance Cell I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a WIFI installation
appointment
 that your team missed despite having a confirmed booking. I booked a 5G home internet set-up service through your Bell website chatbot for my home at 2758 Eglinton Avenue East, close to the intersection of Eglinton Avenue East and Danforth Road, for which I received a confirmation email consisting of
appointment
 time, service engineer details and his cell number. To notify you, I have recently relocated from Winnipeg to Ontario for
work
 and I need a WIFI with optimum bandwidth urgently for uninterrupted
work
.
Additionally
, I
work
 in customer service for a reputable bank with a
work
-from-home arrangement that necessitates high-speed internet.
Furthermore
, I make several online transactions to support our customers which requires me to have fast internet connectivity.
Firstly
, I would request you to reschedule my
appointment
 on an urgent basis so that I can catch up on my
work
.
Nevertheless
, as a valued customer of Bell for the
last
 10 years, I would expect at least a no-show intimation before
canceling
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 the
appointment
. Thanks & Best Regards, Nilanjana Das
Submitted by 1993nilanjanadas on

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