The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate
units
of
electricity
by five different
fuel
sources in
Australia
and
France
in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that coal was the main
fuel
source for
electricity
in
Australia
while
nuclear power was the majority of
fuel
source in
France
in 2000. Looking at the information in more detail, in
Australia
, 50
units
of
electricity
used coal,
while
50
units
of
electricity
used coal and natural
gas
in the equal number in
France
, in 1980.
Australia
consumed natural
gas
and hydropower for
electricity
at 20
units
and 20
units
. In
France
, 20
units
and 15
units
of
electricity
used oil and nuclear power respectively. In 2000,
Australia
used coal as the main
fuel
around two third
units
of 180
units
total, and 36
units
and 4
units
came from the
fuel
of hydropower, natural
gas
, and oil respectively.
However
, the most significant
fuel
source in
France
was nuclear power at 126
units
. 50
units
used coal and oil, and merely 4
units
used natural
gas
and hydropower.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words units, electricity, fuel, australia, france, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • electricity production
  • fuel source
  • percentage
  • units of electricity
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • nuclear power
  • hydropower
  • oil
  • renewable energy
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • remain constant
  • proportion
  • notable shift
  • comparatively
  • account for
  • dominant source
  • aggregate change
  • fluctuate
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