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letter to a manager of hotels for left items at the hotel.

#manager #hotels #items #hotel
Voyage Hotels We had an absolutely amazing time at the Voyage Hotel. Nothing was too much trouble. The staff went out of their way to help us, and
besides
, they made us feel very welcome. The rooms were spacious and crisp, as was the
breath-taking
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 view we had from our window. The hotel has
such
 a big estate, and one thing we really appreciated was that it was located on the front side of it. On top of that, it has attentive employees and qualified facilities
such
 as an aquapark, a golf course, a kids club, a water sports
center
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, etc. One thing we especially enjoyed was the food because it was prepared by experienced chefs, the variety of the food changes day by day, and the products are fresh, so they are not bland. One problem was that the pillows were firm, and the sheets were stained and dusty.
In addition
, the distances between the 4 genres of restaurants are undoubtedly too much for elders,
that is
way
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 they arrange couples of buggies but of course they were full the whole time. Another problem is that you have to wake up early to arrange sunbeds for the in-house guests.
Also
, the accommodations were too crowded; I would have preferred a quieter place.
To sum up
, you get what you pay for, and it had everything we could wish for. Thanks for
this
 beautiful experience that you gave me and my family.
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