The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates how many
students
from five foreign countries
enrolled in a third year
computer science course at a Canadian college. Add a hyphen
third-year
Overall
, the number
of female students
is larger than that of male ones, and women tend to choose net working
core Add a hyphen
net-working
course
compared to men.
The Fix the agreement mistake
courses
number
of students
from China, including 8 men and 9 women, is the largest in the graph. And more than three fourths
of female Add a hyphen
three-fourths
students
enrolled in network
core option, Correct article usage
the network
although
only a
eighth of male Change the article
an
students
chose that option. This
tendency is same
as in Correct article usage
the same
students
from Singapore and Malaysia while
the student’s number
from both this
Correct determiner usage
these
countries
is smaller than that of China.
On the other hand
, only on
Sri Change preposition
in
lanka
, the Change the capitalization
Lanka
number
of women is smaller than that of men. Focusing on France female students
who entered in net working
option do not exist Correct your spelling
networking
contrast
to other Change preposition
in contrast
countries
’ trend
.
The table provides Fix the agreement mistake
trends
the
data about journeys made by different forms of Correct article usage
apply
transport
such
as; car
, bicycle, public transport
and on foot in four countries
including Canada
, Belgium, Germany and Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
. And the bar chart illustrates the result of a survey about Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
car
use
in Canada
.
Overall
, the use
of car
is much more popular than other transportation in all Fix the agreement mistake
cars
countries
, and in Canada
, the main reasons that people use
cars are need
for work and Correct article usage
the need
lack
of other methods.
Focusing on Correct article usage
the lack
car
use
, it is the most popular mode of transport
in each country, especially in Canada
, 90% journeys
are made by Change preposition
of journeys
car
. Although
bike
is the least popular means in almost all Add an article
the bike
countries
, it has great popularity following the car
in Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
and 26% of journeys are made by Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
bicycles
in the nation. Examining public Fix the agreement mistake
bicycle
transport
and on foot, they are used as modes for travel at about 10% on average.
Considering the
Correct article usage
apply
car
use
in Canada
, Canadians use
cars mainly because of Correct pronoun usage
their needs
needs
for work or no alternatives. Fix the agreement mistake
need
Also
, there are some other reasons, for example
, cars are convenient, car
is quicker than other Add an article
the car
a car
transport
and they have to work nightshift.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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