The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the
percentage
of job providers in various areas Who had problems finding employees in 2003 and 2004.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the maximum shortage was of skilled workers and the minimum of technical and managerial staff. In 2003, in the manufacturing, building,
commerce
, and services
sectors
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almost equal
percentage
(41%-47%) found difficulty in hiring skilled workers.
This
percentage
increased slightly in all
sectors
except for the
commerce
sector, in which it decreased in 2004. Between 20% and 26% of employers found it hard to find unskilled labour in 2003. The
percentage
increased in all
sectors
except
commerce
, where it fell to 19%. The technical and managerial staff was the least difficult to find. In the construction sector, the
percentage
of employers who found it tough to find staff was 14%, but it decreased by 4% in 2004. In the manufacturing, services and
commerce
sectors
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the
percentage
fell from 8%,5% and 2% in 2003 to 6%,2% and 0% by 2004 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, commerce, sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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