The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK be-tween 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK be-tween 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, 

and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates how many
tonnes
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of goods were transported in the UK by four separate forms of transport from 1972 to 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the highest tonnage of goods was distributed by road during the period.
Conversely
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,
pipeline
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the pipeline
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was the conveyance method which carried the lowest weight throughout. Focusing on water and rail as means of transport, these distributed 39
million
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tonnes
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and 40
million
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tonnes
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of goods respectively in 1972. By 1976, their figures were identical at 40
million
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tonnes
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, after which water conveyance increased considerably as rail transportation fell. Rail distribution eventually recovered following some fluctuation to 41
million
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tonnes
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transported in 2000. Meanwhile, transport via water levelled out around 59
million
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tonnes
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before dipping in 1996 and
then
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rising to 62
million
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in 2000. As for haulage via road and pipeline, the former rose from 72
million
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tonnes
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in 1972 to about 98
million
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in 2000,
while
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the latter began at 2
million
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tonnes
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before growing by 20
million
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over the next twenty years, remaining at approximately 22
million
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until the century’s end.
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