The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the percentage of monthly change in prices of
copper
, nickel, and
also
zinc throughout 2014.
Overall
, every commodity fluctuated for all 12
months
.
Copper
started January with the highest price which reached 6%.
Then
, it dropped for the next 2 years until March and stayed at the same value until April. Unfortunately, it continued to decline and touched its lowest
point
in June. It rose sharply in July and remained stable at -1% until September.
Finally
, in December it reached 1%.
On the other hand
,
Copper
started at 2% in January. It was decreasing to -0.5% in May but remained steady until June. It increased to 1% in July and remained stable for the next following 2
months
. In October, it decrease to 0.5% and reached the final number 1.5%.
Lastly
, Zinc started at 1% in January. Unlike the other metals, it increased in February significantly to 3%.
However
, it was declining for the next 4
months
until June to its lowest
point
. It rose a little bit to -0.5% in July. But, it decreased again to -1% in October. It jumped for the next 2
months
and reached the final
point
of 2%. Both
copper
, nickel, and zinc had fluctuation for 12
months
but reached their lowest
point
in July. The three
also
remained steady from July to September.
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