The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years.many of the problems young people now experirnce,such as juvenile delinquency,arise from the afct that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.

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empowerment and employment have gone through rapid changes and more

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of society than ever.

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juvenile delinquency has increased nowadays. First of all, a child needs the tenderness and guidance of

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are working they have very little

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. The trends of both working

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are leading

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, lack of morality and

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which has severe psychological damage among

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teenagers.

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is directly leading to issues like crime,

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and immoral activities conducted by

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adolescents. Again,

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trend that a father would bring the daily bread for the family

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would foster and take care of the

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employment and in

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is positive from many perspectives and yet we can see

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immense competition among the married couple especially regarding their

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they totally overlook

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. Fatherhood is important and he has many roles to play for the

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but a mother, as we have seen throughout the century, makes the major share of contribution towards

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. When a mother has very little

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to share with her kids, the problem related to juvenile crime increases. The teenage

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in everyone’s life and if

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can’t contribute

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duties at that

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have a chance to go astray. With working mothers,

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