The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph indicates the amount of one nation’s earnings in five different categories from 2015 to 2016, and the given table represents the difference in percentage between two given years.
Overall
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, most products showed an upward trend in the volume of income
while
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only one category indicated a downward trend. In detail, export earnings of textiles showed the smallest rate
while
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a change of percentage was the largest, which was a 15.24% increase.
On the other hand
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, petroleum products indicated the highest rate at over 60
billion
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in both years, which rose by 3%. In the case of engineered goods, the figure climbed from about 58
billion
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to just over 60
billion
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between 2015 and 2016.
On the contrary
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, the figure for gems and jewellery decreased by 5.18%, to approximately 40
billion
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in 2016. The export earnings in the agricultural products category levelled out at just over 30
billion
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during the given period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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