The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the percentage of six different types of households that are living in poverty in Australia in the year 1999. From the statistics, it can be inferred that sole-parent and aged couples take up the highest and lowest proportion of shortage, respectively.
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, it is noticeable that households with children are more likely to suffer from insufficient money in comparison to elderly people. Apparently,
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Single parents constitute more than one-fifth of poor level, single-aged persons made up 6%, at 54000.
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, couples with children are more likely to suffer from a shortage.
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, couples without children contain a lower proportion, at 7%. Aged couple people were at least more likely to face adequate money and just 4% of them are poor.
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, single individuals needed more money
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359000 of them didn’t have sufficient fees. It is
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worth noting that the
overall
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population of Australian individuals in poverty was 1837000 which represented 11%.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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