The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information on the estimation of the ability of both genders to read and write all around the
world
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between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
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, the average rate of literacy all around the globe was 82.2%, which consists of more men than
women
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.
Firstly
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, based on the chart, males had a high rate of literacy at 87.2%.
Furthermore
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, looking at the individual score, Europe had the most literate males at 99.2%, which is more than 10% of the
world
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's average rate.
Following
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this
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result, Oceania and the Americas only had a 0.1% difference between them, at 94.2% and 94.1%, respectively. Meanwhile, Asian's men had slightly lower than the
world
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's average, at 85.9%,
while
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African men had lower results at 71.6%.
On the other hand
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, looking at females around the globe, over three-quarters of females were literate.
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to
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, similar to its counterpart, European
women
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had the most education than other nations, at 98.5%.
Similarly
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, over nine out of 10
women
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(93.2%) in America were literate, which is followed by Oceanian
women
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at 92.7%.
Nonetheless
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, Asia and Africa had lower numbers than the
world
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's average.
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more than 7 out of 10 Asian
women
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were literate,
however
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, only around half of the African
women
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had the same education.
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