The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information on the estimation of the ability of both genders to read and write all around the
world
between 2000 and 2004. Use synonyms
Overall
, the average rate of literacy all around the globe was 82.2%, which consists of more men than Linking Words
women
.
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Firstly
, based on the chart, males had a high rate of literacy at 87.2%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, looking at the individual score, Europe had the most literate males at 99.2%, which is more than 10% of the Linking Words
world
's average rate. Use synonyms
Following
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result, Oceania and the Americas only had a 0.1% difference between them, at 94.2% and 94.1%, respectively. Meanwhile, Asian's men had slightly lower than the Linking Words
world
's average, at 85.9%, Use synonyms
while
African men had lower results at 71.6%.
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On the other hand
, looking at females around the globe, over three-quarters of females were literate. Linking Words
In addition
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this
, similar to its counterpart, European Linking Words
women
had the most education than other nations, at 98.5%. Use synonyms
Similarly
, over nine out of 10 Linking Words
women
(93.2%) in America were literate, which is followed by Oceanian Use synonyms
women
at 92.7%. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, Asia and Africa had lower numbers than the Linking Words
world
's average. Use synonyms
While
more than 7 out of 10 Asian Linking Words
women
were literate, Use synonyms
however
, only around half of the African Linking Words
women
had the same education.Use synonyms
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