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The cahrt below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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The data provided in the form of a bar chart compares the daily consumption of five proportions of
fruit
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 and vegetables among men, women and children in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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, there was an upward trend in eating fresh
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 and vegetables over the surveyed period, except in 2007 when the popularity of
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 kind of food decreased.
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,
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 and vegetables are liked more by women and less by children over the entire period. From 2001 to the next 2 years, the figure for eating
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