the table shows the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink houseing

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At 19%, Germany spends the most on entertainment,

whereas

the UK and Turkey spend around half

this

amount.

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the table shows the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink houseing

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?