The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar graph explains the number of women and
men
in one Asian country who succeed in taking the driving exam from 1980 to 2010
In general, there is a clearly different percentage of both genders where the
women are in a higher position than Correct article usage
apply
men
to pass the test in the last
thirty years. However
, It shows a little inconsistent improvement for the girls in the last
ten years, in contrast
to the men
who show a stable change from the first year until 2000 but then
finally
experienced the same position till the last
period.
In 1980, around 49% of women proceeded the driving, then
slightly rose up to 53% for the next ten-year until it hit the peak of almost 69% in 2000 and slowly decreased to 65% in 2010. On the other hand
, the number of men
gradually increased from the first year at about 29% to around 38% in 1990 and from 2000 to 2010 it sat at the same position at just around 49%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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