You recenlty organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter describe the party and how it went explain why you were pleased with the hotel's service

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Dear sir/ madam I am writing

this

regards the party that you host

last

weekend. I really appreciate that you organise it really well. The sitting arrangements and food was nice too. But I want to lead you to your weakness. Though I ask for a vegetarian option

while

I book catering but we didn't get any kind of vegetarian food

while

we serve. Some of our members eat just bread on that day which is embarrassing for me.

While

ask to your staff to refund those members' food they answer in an inappropriate way that seems too rude to me. ,

Also

you arrange inexperienced staff for us even they don't understand what we are looking for. So , I am requesting you to correct those things next time. Or I can book some other caters for my next meeting.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

140 words

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You recenlty organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter describe the party and how it went explain why you were pleased with the hotel's service

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Companies should provide sorts and social facilities for local communities.

Cultures around the world are becoming more similar that ever before. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?