The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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This
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bar graph illustrates the value of
export
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earnings in a country over two
years
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,
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the table compares the information about the proportion of each category of exports in 2015 and 2016.
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, we can see that the percentage of the value of
export
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was almost high in 2016
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every item except gems and jewellery.
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, petroleum products earned more money by exporting more than other categories in both
years
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and
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between the rate was 3%. In both
years
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it was able to earn around 60 billion dollars.
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textile is the lowest earned
export
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product in 2016 and 2015,
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in 2016 it was 15. 24% higher than the
last
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year. Though, it was supposed to give 32 billion dollars
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the country in 2016. Engineering goods were the second most valuable item in these two
years
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.
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, the amount of money it gave
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the country in 2016 was the same as petroleum products in the same year.
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, the agriculture products have a little bit higher
export
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rate in 2016 than in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, years with synonyms.
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