The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.
The diagram illustrates the way in which chocolate is made and how it is
then
used in daily consumption.
Overall
,it is clear that
pods
growing on the cacao trees can be used for producing liquid chocolates after it has been processed by being filtered and then
roasted in a factory.Concluding the process of chocolate with 10 main stages.
Initially
,ripe red pods
grown up in S.America,Africa and Indonesia are ripped and the pods
are picked from the tree.After that,these pods
are harvested in order to collect white cocoa beans
.Furthermore
,these cocoa beans
pass through the filter to remove any impurities. Fermented cocoa beans
are then
,spread in the sun to arid and the droughty beans
ıs next bagged ready to make measurements.
The prepared sacks of beans
transmit to fabric by train or a lorry.Once it has been undertaken,it continues the process by toasting on a stove.From this
point,the roasted beans
go through a sieve,where they are crushed and taken off the outer shell.At this
stage of the process,the purified beans
are pressed in order to make a liquid form of chocolate to make it fit for consumption.Submitted by arnakaldybai on
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