The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

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bought

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buying

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and drinking

coffee

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and tea in

big

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the big

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city

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cities

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of Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban,

Adelaide

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and Hobart.

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the proportion of people

went

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a cafe

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cafe

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cafes

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for

coffee

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or tea rose in all cities, except

Adelaide

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while

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bought

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buying

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of fresh

coffee

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was

lowest

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the lowest

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proprotion

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proportion

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all cities. The percentage of people

went

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who went

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cafe

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cafes

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for

coffee

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or tea in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart reached

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apply

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around 61%. The proportion of bought instant

coffee

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in Hobart was more than 50%,

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Sydney and Melbourn were below

its

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. But

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the consumotion

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consumotion

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consumption

of fresh

coffee

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were

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almost

equally

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, the people of Brisban went to

cafe

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cafes

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more than

Adelaide

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, at about 53%.

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the percentage of bought instant and fresh

coffee

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were the same in both

Brishban

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Brisbane

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Adelaide

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, at nearly 50% and 30%,

respectivelly

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respectively

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

135 words

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