The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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The chart illustrates the
bought
and drinking Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
and tea in big
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the big
city
of Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban,Fix the agreement mistake
cities
Adelaide
and Hobart.
It is clear that
the proportion of people went
to Correct pronoun usage
who went
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a cafe
the cafe
cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea rose in all cities, except Adelaide
, while
bought
of fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
was lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
proprotion
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proportion
at
all cities.
The percentage of people Change preposition
in
went
to Correct pronoun usage
who went
cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart reached by
around 61%. The proportion of bought instant Change preposition
apply
coffee
in Hobart was more than 50%, while
Sydney and Melbourn were below its
. But Correct pronoun usage
it
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the consumotion
consumotion
of fresh Correct your spelling
consumption
coffee
were
almost Change the verb form
was
equally
.
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equal
However
, the people of Brisban went to cafe
more than Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Adelaide
, at about 53%. While
the percentage of bought instant and fresh coffee
were the same in both Brishban
and Correct your spelling
Brisbane
Adelaide
, at nearly 50% and 30%, respectivelly
.Correct your spelling
respectively
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