The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram displays a

process

of

molding

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glass

containers.

Overall

, there are nine steps to make shaping

glass

from based materials to a quality assurance

process

and ready to be delivered.

Firstly

, the raw materials are inserted into a furnace, and the substances are melted

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temperature of approximately 105 Celcius.

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the previous

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hot

glass

so the hot

glass

needs to be pressed in the first mould, and a thick wall

container

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from

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wall

container

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molded

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glass

.

Secondly

, the shaping

container

glass

that resulted from

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2 now the

glass

is heated at 482 Celsius, and

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the next step, it continues to cool the product for 60 minutes until reaching a temperature of about 25 Celsius.

Moreover

, the eighth step is to assess the outcome.

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, the assessor separates the bad product

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a waste section and the decent product to be packed,

therefore

the shaping

glass

container

is ready to be delivered.