The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram displays a
process
of Use synonyms
molding
Change the spelling
moulding
glass
containers.
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Overall
, there are nine steps to make shaping Linking Words
glass
from based materials to a quality assurance Use synonyms
process
and ready to be delivered.
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Firstly
, the raw materials are inserted into a furnace, and the substances are melted Linking Words
on
Change preposition
at
the
temperature of approximately 105 Celcius. Correct article usage
a
Furthermore
, Linking Words
on
the previous Change preposition
apply
process
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results
hot Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
glass
so the hot Use synonyms
glass
needs to be pressed in the first mould, and a thick wall Use synonyms
container
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is resulted
from Change to the active voice
results
has resulted
this
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process
. The manufacturing continues to fill the air on Use synonyms
thick
wall Correct article usage
the thick
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container
into Fix the agreement mistake
containers
Add an article
the molded
a molded
molded
Change the spelling
moulded
glass
.
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Secondly
, the shaping Linking Words
container
Use synonyms
glass
that resulted from Use synonyms
mold
2 now the Change the spelling
mould
glass
is heated at 482 Celsius, and Use synonyms
on
the next step, it continues to cool the product for 60 minutes until reaching a temperature of about 25 Celsius. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, the eighth step is to assess the outcome. Linking Words
In addition
, the assessor separates the bad product Linking Words
to
a waste section and the decent product to be packed, Change preposition
into
therefore
the shaping Linking Words
glass
Use synonyms
container
is ready to be delivered.Use synonyms
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