Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing video games. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Because
video
games
are becoming more popular with children
than ever, many parents express their worries about whether or not their children
should spend time outdoors instead
of playing games
. I believe that video
games
are good, but only in moderation.
Engaging in outdoor activities
is always good for children
for various reasons. Outdoor activities
are better than video
games
for both their physical health and morals. Playing video
games
means looking at high-contrast screens for an extended period, which is damaging to children
’s eyes. Also
, today’s games
involve blatant violence, which can distort their moral beliefs. Secondly
, doing outdoor activities
is a way to connect with their neighborhood
. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
For example
, when hanging outdoors, like playing soccer, children
can develop their communication skills between their playmates and a sense of belonging with that community.
However
, that is
not to say that video
games
are not important for child development. Firstly
, video
games
teach children
technology fluency, which is a skill essential in the current society. For example
, many children
who play video
games
grow up being
familiar with computer hardware and keyboard shortcuts. These skills would come in handy for them in the future. Unnecessary verb
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Secondly
, I believe parents should not prevent children
from playing video
games
as these games
can serve as career inspirations. For example
, children
can be interested in the storyline or the graphic design of games
and be motivated to become pro-gamers
or game developers.
In conclusion, the benefits of hanging outdoors are undeniable for child development. Correct your spelling
pro gamers
However
, I believe that, in some cases, allowing children
to engage in video
games
can also
be important. Parents should understand that moderation is the key in
both types of Change preposition
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activities
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