The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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illustrats
how much both Correct your spelling
illustrates
gender
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genders
that
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apply
art
that take place in
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at
an
university in Change the article
a
UK
in 2011. Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, it can be seen that although
female students were higher portion than males in every subject, only in art
and design that the propertion
of boys was more than girls.
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proportion
To begin
with, the top three most feavorite
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favourite
subgect
were Correct your spelling
subject
subjects
english
and literature, communication and media study, and linguistics, the female students in these Change the capitalization
English
subject
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subjects
around
200-250 Add a missing verb
were around
peoples
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people
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male students lower
than that.
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were lower
to
, the top least Change preposition
apply
feavorite
subjects were philosophy, history and Correct your spelling
favourite
archeology
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archaeology
art
and design. The philosophy has 50 males and 150 females, which
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and
this
subject is the lowest propertion
in male Correct your spelling
proportion
student
. Followed by, almost 100 boys and about 125 girls in history and Fix the agreement mistake
students
archeology
.Change the spelling
archaeology
Finally
, art
and design experienced a propertion
that female lower than Correct your spelling
proportion
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the male
a male
male
with 175 males and 150 females.Fix the agreement mistake
males
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