The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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how much both

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were educating six different courses

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in 2011.

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female students were higher portion than males in every subject, only in

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and literature, communication and media study, and linguistics, the female students in these

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200-250

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subjects were philosophy, history and

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. Followed by, almost 100 boys and about 125 girls in history and

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with 175 males and 150 females.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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