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In many countries, people are consuming more sugar-based drinks than before. Why is this happening, and what could be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

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Good health is a chief principle to live disease-free life. Consumption of
drinks
 containing lots of
sugar
 is increasing in most countries. There are so many causes for an increase in sweetened
drinks
 which will be elaborated on in detail in
this
 essay
along with
 the recommendation to reduce them.
Firstly
, these
sugar
-based
drinks
 are very tasty which satisfies the taste buds and are easily available in the markets. Manufacturers add preservatives and other ingredients which create the myth that these beverages are fresh which provokes a person to select these potions.
For example
, whenever people feel tired, they prefer coco cola
instead
 of plain
water
 thinking that it will quench their thirst but it gives craving for more.
Secondly
, humans are so entrenched in their day-to-day activities which makes them compromise with their health. People buy bicarbonate
drinks
 with the maximum quantity of
sugar
due to
 busy schedules in their professional and personal life. Government should conduct awareness programmes and medical campaigns over the numerous diseases like diabetes caused because of excess
sugar
 intake, impose more taxes on these, they should not be sold in school canteens and many more.
Moreover
, the media should add fuel to policy maker’s efforts by using social platforms to encourage the population to follow good habits for their well-being and make them aware of the chemicals present in these aerated
drinks
.
Above all
 these, a person should become determined for their own lifestyle and consume healthy liquids
for instance
 tender coconut
water
, fruit juices without sweeteners, detoxifiers, nutritious
water
 (like cinnamon and lemon
water
), herbal tea, fruit punch, etc.
Overall
, individuals prefer drinking sugary liquids
due to
 their hectic hustle-bustle life
as well as
 easy availability and these can be reduced by outspreading the proper knowledge of diseases and encouraging them to have limited
sugar
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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