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YOU recently attended a meeting at a hotel .when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.in your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter in regard to my project file which I think I left in my hotel room number 407 . I
had
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attended a meeting in your hotel moonlight between 26 to 27
march
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March
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 2023.
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However
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,However
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 I forget to collect my project file
while
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 checking out from
hotel
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the hotel
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 room.
Furthermore
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, the file is very important
for
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 me. As it
contain
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 minute of
meeting
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the meeting
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 and
detailed
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a detailed
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 discussion of
meeting
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the meeting
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. The file
contain
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contains
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 20 pages and it has
brown
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a brown
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 cover with label meeting details I am requesting you to please send
file
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the file
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 to my mailing address. You can send
file
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files
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 by
bluedart
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Bluedart
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 courier services. It will take 2 days to reach
parcel
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the parcel
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 to
mailing
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the mailing
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 address. Upon receiving the file I will refund courier charges to you. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully James Martin
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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