the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose. summarize the information, and make comparison. write at least 150 words.
These provided diagrams illustrate the instruments and the procedures for making
cement
and concrete. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that several steps must be followed to produce Linking Words
cement
, Use synonyms
whereas
the production of concrete requires only two stages.
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To begin
, when limestone and clay were crushed together using a crusher, they converted to powder,and Linking Words
then
; it was taken into a mixer to make the two ingredients as one component. After, that there was a heating process where the mixture was heated in a rotating heater for a certain time,and Linking Words
then
; Linking Words
this
mixture was ground into a fine powder using a grinder. Linking Words
Finally
, the powder was packed in specific bags.
But, the process for making concrete was simple compared to Linking Words
cement
, Use synonyms
for example
; all components like water 10%, Linking Words
cement
15%, sand 25%, and gravel 50% were added Use synonyms
together with
the same mentioned percentages, and Linking Words
then
all of them were mixed in a concrete mixer for a determined amount of time to produce concrete which could be used for building houses.Linking Words
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