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Band 6.5

You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter, – explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the inconvenience happening to the entire neighbourhood,
due to
 the poor rubbish collector's service. Let me provide you with more details, what's occurring for the past few weeks is that the garbage is not being collected on the scheduled days,
therefore
, we have to keep the garbage bags inside our houses until the next assigned day.
Moreover
,
as a result
 of
this
 , many other problems are getting faced around the houses,
for instance
, one of my friend's daughter is extremely sick because of the increased number of mosquitos in the area.
Furthermore
, one old age uncle is going through breathing issues
due to
 an increased unpleasant odour outside his house. I would like you to take strict action against your employees ,
along with
 it, I want you to issue a new timetable mentioning what days the garbage collection service would take place. Looking forward to a prompt response. Yours faithfully, Gurpreet
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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