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The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture shows the way of simple mineral
water
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 filter is processed and how it
used
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is used
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 to produce clean drinking
water
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. As a human
being
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beings
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, the
needs
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need
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of
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for
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healty
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healthy
water
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 for our body is essential. One of
a
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the
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 very basic
way
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ways
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 to make it
by
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is by
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 doing a filter before drinking it. What we need here are the two drums with different materials inside to produce the drinking
water
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 . The first drum which contained gravel, charcoal and sand is filled with
water
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avove
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above
 it before
tranfering
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transferring
it
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apply
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to the second empty storage drum with
pipe
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a pipe
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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