You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The picture shows the way of simple mineral
water
filter is processed and how it used
to produce clean drinking Add a missing verb
is used
water
.
As a human being
, the Fix the agreement mistake
beings
needs
Fix the agreement mistake
need
of
Change preposition
for
healty
Correct your spelling
healthy
water
for our body is essential. One of a
very basic Correct article usage
the
way
to make it Fix the agreement mistake
ways
by
doing a filter before drinking it. What we need here are the two drums with different materials inside to produce the drinking Add a missing verb
is by
water
.
The first drum which contained gravel, charcoal and sand is filled with water
avove
it before Correct your spelling
above
tranfering
Correct your spelling
transferring
it
to the second empty storage drum with Correct pronoun usage
apply
pipe
Add an article
a pipe
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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