You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently ordered several

dresses

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from your online store and I have an issue with the purchase. | ordered the

empire waisted

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maxi, in

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navy blue, and two wrap

dresses

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, in both maroon and black. All of the

dresses

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were supposed to be size mediums. Unfortunately, when the

dresses

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arrived I noticed several issues with the purchase. The empire-waisted maxi arrived in the correct

color

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but it was a size extra large

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of the medium that I ordered.

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dress is much too large. As for the wrap

dresses

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, both were the correct size but each had their own issues. The maroon wrap dress had a hole in the shoulder seam and looked like it had been previously worn. I did not receive the black wrap dress;

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, a green one came in the package. I need these issues rectified immediately because these

dresses

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were supposed to be part of my work wardrobe for my new job. I begin

this

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job in only seven days; I need you to send me replacement garments today

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so that I can have them in time. Sincerely Faraz

Submitted by farazahmedzaur on Mon Aug 21 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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