The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The charts provide information on the ability of British college students to converse in other languages apart from English over a
ten
-year period. Overall
, the maps showed that the majority of the students were able to speak in Spanish as well between 2000 and 2010.
To begin
with, looking at the chart, it can be seen that less than a third (30%) of the undergraduate spoke Spanish in 2000, which increased by 5% in 2010. Meanwhile, in 2000, one in ten
(10%) undergraduates could also
speak German, which remained the same over the next ten
years. Interestingly, a fifth of them (20%) were able to converse in French. Nonetheless
, this
number decreased by half in 2010.
On the other hand
, the graph also
showed that one in ten
(10%) of the scholars knew two other languages in 2000, nevertheless
, this
number did not change ten
years later. Lastly
, in 2000, less than a fifth (15%) of them only spoke in English. However
, this
number grew to one in five (20%) in 2010.Submitted by meliarizkina86 on
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