The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The charts provide information on the ability of British college students to converse in other languages apart from English over a

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-year period.

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, the maps showed that the majority of the students were able to speak in Spanish as well between 2000 and 2010.

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with, looking at the chart, it can be seen that less than a third (30%) of the undergraduate spoke Spanish in 2000, which increased by 5% in 2010. Meanwhile, in 2000, one in

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(10%) undergraduates could

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speak German, which remained the same over the next

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years. Interestingly, a fifth of them (20%) were able to converse in French.

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number decreased by half in 2010.

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, the graph

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showed that one in

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(10%) of the scholars knew two other languages in 2000,

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number did not change

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years later.

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, in 2000, less than a fifth (15%) of them only spoke in English.

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number grew to one in five (20%) in 2010.

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