The chart illustrates the number of people from history museums, British museums, national museums and science museums who visited different museums in London.
The par graph depicts the citizens who
are
visited Unnecessary verb
apply
from
four kinds of Change preposition
apply
Add an article
the museum
a museum
museum
in London; Fix the agreement mistake
museums
British
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the British
museum
, Correct article usage
the natinal
natinal
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national
museum
, and science
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the science
museum
. It is clear from the graph that all of them have above a quarter of million
Correct article usage
a million
visirter
in all Correct your spelling
visitors
visiter
period
except Fix the agreement mistake
periods
national
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the national
museum
has less than.
According to
what is shown, August has the greatest number
of tourest
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tourist
tourists
with
all Change preposition
of
museum
, it started with a tiny one which was from 250 thousand Fix the agreement mistake
museums
folk
for Change to a plural noun
folks
National
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the National
museum
, the maximum was the massive Capitalize word
Museum
number
around
655 thousand Change preposition
of around
of
citizens in Change preposition
apply
British
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the British
a British
museum
. While
the second greatest was for the same museum
at roughly 490,000. In
the contrary, the National has less than it by three Change the preposition
On
period
.
Change to a plural noun
periods
To sum up
we could say that, the massive figure was for August while
the tiniest number
for October except the British museum
keep the great number
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