You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram exposes the expenses of three different types of several groups of UK citizens in 2004. From the graph, we can see that the increase in
age
has a significant effect on larger spending on Food and drink.
While
budgets for Restaurants and hotels declined
along with
the older people ages. Entertainment was seen rising between the groups.
To begin
with, the expenditure on Restaurants and Hotel has the highest percentage from people under 30 and unfortunately starts to decrease until
reached
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its lowest percentage in the group 61-75.
Then
it rose again to around 7% for the next team.
In contrast
, the spending on Entertainment kept rising from the teams of citizens under 30 and peaked at almost 25% for a team of people with
age
61-75.
However
, it dropped to 13% for teams of
age
76+. Expenses for Food and drink gradually increased for ages under 30
,
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and kept increasing for the
followings
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following
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groups until the highest was 25% for the group of
age
76+.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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