The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram shows the method by which animal skins are made to produce the items.

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it is clear that

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there are 11 stages in the process,starting with drying

skin

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and ending with making leather products . In the first

stage

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,the animal

skin

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is dried under the sun for about one to two days and transported to the factory. Once

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dried

skin

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is in the factory, it is washed with water and lime in order to get rid of the dirt.In the following

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, the

skin

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is soaked in lime so as to remove the oils and fats before going through the

stage

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which is called the flattening

stage

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, the hide of animals is flattened by a roller machine for the purpose of having a flat surface. After that, the flattened

skin

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goes through the tanning

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. At

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point, the

skin

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is soaked in a chemical which is called Tannin (a mixture of water and vegetable matter) Once

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stage

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is completed,leather is polished so that it looks shiny.

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,the polished

skin

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is sent to the factory to produce leather items

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as bags,balls, and sports equipment.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words skin, stage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

188 words

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