The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females of differing
age
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who frequently undertook physical activity in 2010.
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the Malaysian population keeps fit in general, a higher proportion of women than Linking Words
men
exercised in 2010, with some Use synonyms
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differences between Linking Words
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. Middle-aged females were the most likely to work out, Use synonyms
while
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, those aged 15 to 24 tended to do the most physical activity.
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’s exercise habits, younger Use synonyms
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were much more likely to exercise than older Use synonyms
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with 52.8% of those aged under 24 exercising as opposed to only around 40% of older Use synonyms
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By contrast
, around half of all women in all Linking Words
age
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reported keeping fit, especially those aged between 35 and 64 at around 53%. The exception was the youngest Use synonyms
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group in which only 47.7 per cent of women exercised compared to 52.8% of Use synonyms
men
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Similarly
, for people 65 and over, approximately 47% of both sexes were recorded regularly working out.Linking Words
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