The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The chart presents information
of
households in owned and rented conveniences by showing percentages in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
At present, there are many people living in apartments hotels and others, which some people do not have enough money to buy. From the chart, you will see that there are data for households in owned Change preposition
on
accommodation
and households in rented accommodation
, which this
total data shows between 1918 and 2011.In rented accommodation
there is the highest percentage
in 1918 that is
77% and the lowest percentage
in 2001 that is
31%,in 1939 and 1953 there is the same percentage
, which is
68% . In owned Wrong verb form
was
accommodation
there is the highest percentage
in 2001 that is
69% and the lowest percentage
in 1918 that is
23% in 1939 and in 1953 there is the same percentage
, 32% . After data of
owned Change preposition
on
accommodation
steadily increased until 2001.From all the information rented accommodation
will tend to decrease but in owned accommodation
will tend to increase.Submitted by pramai177 on
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