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The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The line graph provides information about the amount of
books
 that were borrowed in four
differen
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different
 months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of
books
, by type, that were borrowed over
this
 time.
Overall
, during
this
4 month
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 period,
books
 taken from Sutton Wood town library reached 300, with all three towns
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 much fewer of them. In June, fifty
books
 were borrowed from Church Mount village,
as well as
 from West Eaton the amount of
books
 taken was the same. As can be seen from the graph,
at the end
 of the period (
on
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 September) they ended with
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 result.
Although
 it is clear from the data that
books
 borrowed from the Ryeslip experienced a steady fall, from
from
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three hundred
books
 to nearly a half. As is presented in the pie chart 43
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 of
books
 were
fiction
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 genre,
it
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 is close to
one half
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 of all types. Meanwhile, for the
giction
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fiction
, history and science
genres
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 the pattern appears slightly different. They are just under 20
percent
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.
Although
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 type makes
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very small proportion of borrowed
books
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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