The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
The line graph provides information about the amount of
books
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that were borrowed in four
differen
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different
months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of
books
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, by type, that were borrowed over
this
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time.
Overall
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, during
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4 month
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period,
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taken from Sutton Wood town library reached 300, with all three towns
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much fewer of them. In June, fifty
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were borrowed from Church Mount village,
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from West Eaton the amount of
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taken was the same. As can be seen from the graph,
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of the period (
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September) they ended with
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result.
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it is clear from the data that
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borrowed from the Ryeslip experienced a steady fall, from
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three hundred
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to nearly a half. As is presented in the pie chart 43
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of
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were
fiction
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in fiction
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genre,
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is close to
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of all types. Meanwhile, for the
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fiction
, history and science
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the pattern appears slightly different. They are just under 20
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.
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type makes
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very small proportion of borrowed
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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