Few people think that it is important for collecting personal information such interest, hobbies and material status. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Collecting personal
data
might be necessary for some Use synonyms
people
. They Use synonyms
are
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apply
collecting
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collect
information
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such
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interest
, Fix the agreement mistake
interests
hobby
, and material Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
data
. Use synonyms
This
can help them to remember about their personalization. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
should be worried Use synonyms
to share
their Change preposition
about sharing
information
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to
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with
others
.
Sometimes, companies want to know about our personal Use synonyms
information
for background checking criteria. Those can be our Use synonyms
interest
, Fix the agreement mistake
interests
hobby
, or material Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
status
. Use synonyms
For instance
, our interest can help them to place the best position for us when we are working in the office. Linking Words
Second,
material Linking Words
status
is being used when companies try to dig down our financial history. Sometimes, financial Use synonyms
status
can be done from the bank so it will support their Use synonyms
data
to hire us. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
hobby
can be shared by Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
people
who have Use synonyms
same
leisure Correct article usage
the same
activity
. Fix the agreement mistake
activities
This
condition can create other opportunities for growing the connection around the Linking Words
people
in the office or something more.
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On the contrary
, sharing our personal Linking Words
information
might be dangerous because Use synonyms
people
can use our Use synonyms
data
to do something malicious. To illustrate, our material Use synonyms
status
can be seen by Use synonyms
others
. Sometimes, bad guys can sell our Use synonyms
data
on the dark web so they will manipulate our Use synonyms
data
to buy or loan something on the internet without our permission. Use synonyms
Besides
, a lot of activities called phishing can be generated by bad guys for impersonating us. Linking Words
This
situation really makes Linking Words
horrible
experience so we must Correct article usage
a horrible
aware
and protect our personal Add a missing verb
be aware
information
securely.
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To conclude
, there are two sides Linking Words
from
sharing or collecting our personal Change preposition
to
information
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to
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with
others
. For me, it will be better, if we protect our Use synonyms
data
or Use synonyms
information
securely. Use synonyms
This
means we do not have to share Linking Words
the
personal Correct article usage
apply
information
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to
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with
others
unless they are trusted.Use synonyms
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