The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

given

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apply

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bar charts demonstrate the percentage of men and women and

also

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four age groups watching

game

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shows and reality shows in Australia.

Overall

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although

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reality shows are more popular among females, both genders are equally attracted to

game

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shows.

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, people who are older than 45, watch both genres more than the others.

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the charts, 60

percent

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of both genders watch

game

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shows

however

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, just about 35

percent

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of men are interested in the other TV program which is 2 times less than the proportion of women which is in the region of 70.

Following

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this

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, the same equal proportion of people older than 45 watch reported TV programme genres.

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, half of the youngest group who are between 16 to 24 years old watch

game

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programmes which is a similar proportion for them attracted to the other

genre

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genres

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In addition

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this

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, individuals aged between 35 to 45 have a noticeable difference in watching these shows

and

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apply

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about 70

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percent

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per cent

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of them are interested in watching reality shows

while

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just about 40

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percent

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per cent

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of them watch the other show. A similar pattern can be seen for the second age group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words game, percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 8 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

viewership
genre
preference
demographic
age group
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comparison
trend
balanced interest
inclination
significant difference
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The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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