Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. To what extent do you agree?

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It is firmly acknowledged that since climate change has a worldwide adverse, the burden of tackling its outcomes should be put on individuals and not
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states. In
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for the current environmental
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and
further
they are in
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possession
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powerful
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to make considerable contributions. One reason for disagreement with placing
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responsibility
for environmental issues like climate change on people of the society rather than big businesses and governments is that by and
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large
they are the largest drivers of the current situation. A sizeable portion of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases have been emitted by these companies or triggered by governments’
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.
For instance
, the Fossil fuel and petrochemical industry are solely responsible for up to 65% of annual carbon dioxide emitted in the air.
By contrast
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attribute to only a small portion of
this
emission considering their population.
On the other hand
, individual's contribution for handling
this
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is pale in comparison to that of governments and corporations. These
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institutions
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emmense
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power in
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with
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funding and the execution of
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initiatives
. They can allocate budgets up to billion dollars and fund research
as well as
forming a plan of action so that their aim could be reached
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. Take
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States of America,
for example
, where the current administration established an environmental conservation plan with an annual investment budget of 40 billion dollars.
Hence
, states and businesses are far more capable of performing environmental rescue
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, so they should be made responsible
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with
this
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. In conclusion, I would argue that companies and administrations should be liable for natural preservation since they are the highest contributors
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situation,
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, they can achieve
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promising outcomes compared to citizens alone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • responsibility
  • address
  • crucial role
  • impact
  • collaboration
  • carbon footprint
  • regulations
  • policies
  • incentivize
  • act responsibly
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