Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

Global warming, rising incidences of nature's calamities and depleting natural reserves are some of the major concerns in today's time. All around the world, authorities are trying to find solutions for these prevailing issues and resolve the crisis situation. For
this
, some people suggest to minimize the usage of petroleum oil and promoting other resources like solar power and wind
while
others disagree and believe that it would lead to a poor economy. I agree with the former opinion and will discuss details in
this
essay.
Firstly
, Humans have been using Earth's reservoirs
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Economic collapse
  • Sustainable development
  • Energy transition
  • Green technology
  • Carbon footprint
  • Long-term benefits
  • Energy efficiency
  • Job creation
  • Solar panels
  • Wind turbines
  • Global warming
  • Resource depletion
  • Energy security
  • Environmental degradation
  • Alternative resources
  • Economic sustainability
  • Clean energy
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