the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared to 2015
The chart provides information about the country's sales overseas of various goods (Petroleum
products
, Engineering goods, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural products
and Textiles
) in the period 2015 and 2016 and the table illustrates good sales overseas in the duration of 2016 compared to 2015 percentage-wise.
Overall
, in the era of ,2015 Petroleum products
were the top exporting products
whereas
, Textiles
were at least exported products
in 2015.However
,in the year ,2016 it is also
the same as the era in 2015 the highest-selling product abroad is Petroleum products
and the least is Textiles
.Comparison in the table between 2015 and 2016 is also
increasing and decreasing in which Textiles
is in the top percentage change number and Agricultura products
have the less change in number.Submitted by shahisandesh95 on
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